Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 28 August 2014

Story map



This is my story map

My teacher wrote this and I thought of it.  I was telling her ideas!  I already had lots of ideas and I used them it was kind of tricky to think of those ideas.

Friday, 1 August 2014

Venn Diagram




This is my venn diagram I found this tricky because I had to figure out what is different Next time I will search for ideas.

Friday, 30 May 2014

World Champions


WALT draft a speech using an online graphic organiser.

I found this tricky because I had to write three facts or examples to write for each reason.  Next time I will come up with a lot of ideas before I do it.

Friday, 23 May 2014

Anzac writing




We read lots of books and articles about war.  We listened to someone who was in the war.
We wanted to share the information and new information that we have learned from our readings and our findings with our peers.

WALT present our information about Social Conflict.
Reflection: This is my Anzac scroll I enjoyed this piece of work because I learned a lot of things about Anzac.  I thought it was tricky because I had to get a lot of ideas.

Wednesday, 14 May 2014

Recount Post Cards.

WALT write a recount using a post card format.
This is my postcard I enjoyed writing it because it was faster on a computer I thought it was tricky a little because when I had to think of making it shorter it was complicated.


Tuesday, 4 March 2014

Bio Poem



I.A.L.T write a bio poem.
S.C 
I know I will be successful when I can:

  • write adjectives describing me
  • write about my fears and loves
  • write about my feelings
I found writing this poem difficult because it was hard to think about what I love and what I fear and things like that!
Next time I should think more and maybe do a brain storm to get ideas in my head!!!

Wednesday, 25 September 2013

Thursday, 8 August 2013

Little Yellow Riding Hood


Little  Yellow  Riding  Hood
One   mysterious  night  Little Yellow  Riding  Hood
woke  up because she needed  to  get  her  basket  from  out   of   her  wardrobe. She  got  up  tiredly  and  opened  the  wardrobe  door, when something  really strange happened. She appeared  to  be in a magical  place.  Suddenly...HER BASKET GOT STOLEN!!   A nasty mean  robber had stolen the basket filled with some  delicious  apples. So Little Yellow  Riding  Hood  began  a  journey   to  go  and find  her basket .


On the way she met some friends.They   introduced themselves.Their names were Charlotte  and  Edward .  They were wearing some  beautiful sparkly  tops. Little Yellow Riding  Hood  asked them if they knew where the robber lived, and they said he lived in a old ,misty house in Candyland.   So they set off on a journey  to find the robber’s old mistI house.  


They were walking through Candyland.  In Candyland  there were some delicious scurumpcious ,candy.  Finally they got there.  They noticed the robber’s black old dirty treehouse in the middle of Candyland. There  was somthing else they noticed , the robber’s house was the only thing that didn’t match with the candy stuff.  


The robber was sad that his things didn’t match.  So Little Yellow Riding Hood  and her new friends thought of an idea.  They said “if you give us back Little Yellow Riding  Hoods basket,then we will make your house match all the scrumpcious candy things”.  The robber agreed to the idea.  

The first thing they did was the windows.  They decorated them with crunchy sugar that makes your mouth go as soft as a furious grizzly bears fur.  Then they did the roof.  They covered it with some sour scrumpcious lollies.  Around the house they put some juicy tall liquorice statues.

The robber loved his new house and Little Yellow Riding Hood finally got her basket back .
The End

By Briahna

MY REFLECTION

Wednesday, 12 June 2013

My Onomatopoeia Art

This is my FANTASTIC!!!! onomatopoeia art. Onomatopoeia is like a word that describes what it does. We did this because it was part of our shared book and we thought it was pretty cool. Also it would fill up our class room.By Briahna


Thursday, 9 May 2013