Briahna, you have used some good personal voice in your recount to describe how you felt about this event that happened in the holidays. The learning intention was to sequence the events in the right order and you are working well towards this learning. I agree with your reflection, you could use some time connectives in your writing, however there was a good sense of sequence in your writing.
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Briahna, you have used some good personal voice in your recount to describe how you felt about this event that happened in the holidays. The learning intention was to sequence the events in the right order and you are working well towards this learning. I agree with your reflection, you could use some time connectives in your writing, however there was a good sense of sequence in your writing.
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