Little Yellow Riding Hood
One mysterious night Little Yellow Riding Hood
woke up because she needed to get her basket from out of her wardrobe. She got up tiredly and opened the wardrobe door, when something really strange happened. She appeared to be in a magical place. Suddenly...HER BASKET GOT STOLEN!! A nasty mean robber had stolen the basket filled with some delicious apples. So Little Yellow Riding Hood began a journey to go and find her basket .
On the way she met some friends.They introduced themselves.Their names were Charlotte and Edward . They were wearing some beautiful sparkly tops. Little Yellow Riding Hood asked them if they knew where the robber lived, and they said he lived in a old ,misty house in Candyland. So they set off on a journey to find the robber’s old mistI house.
They were walking through Candyland. In Candyland there were some delicious scurumpcious ,candy. Finally they got there. They noticed the robber’s black old dirty treehouse in the middle of Candyland. There was somthing else they noticed , the robber’s house was the only thing that didn’t match with the candy stuff.
The robber was sad that his things didn’t match. So Little Yellow Riding Hood and her new friends thought of an idea. They said “if you give us back Little Yellow Riding Hoods basket,then we will make your house match all the scrumpcious candy things”. The robber agreed to the idea.
The first thing they did was the windows. They decorated them with crunchy sugar that makes your mouth go as soft as a furious grizzly bears fur. Then they did the roof. They covered it with some sour scrumpcious lollies. Around the house they put some juicy tall liquorice statues.
The robber loved his new house and Little Yellow Riding Hood finally got her basket back .
The End
1 comment:
Briahna, I really enjoyed reading your fractured fairytale. You enjoyed our Fairytales unit. You are working well towards the learning intention which was to rewrite a known fairy tale using the elements of narrative writing. You used the success criteria to help you create a fun fractured fairytale. I particularly like how you used interesting words such as mysterious and scrumpcious! Your next step is to work on including more language features such as similes in your writing and to check that your writing is sequenced correctly and makes sense as I helped you with that when you published.
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